Strengths
Sound created the atmosphere for the clip and flowed well.
Good variety of shots used, for example close ups, match on action.
Weaknesses
Dialogue was unclear as sound was louder than the dialogue.
Mise-en-scene was poor as the briefcase was not in my hands at some points.
Lighting was quite dark and unable to see action properly.
Girl walked across the camera in one of the scenes.
Improvements
Use more lighting when filming as it was very dark.
Try to use sound only when appropriate, e.g not over dialogue.
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